Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, May 15, 2015

Blood Story

This is my Blood story. I'm blogging this because it's true, and it happened in 2011, when I was 5.
Picture this: A nice afternoon, at Parkvale school, with three boys on their bikes, riding on the courts.  Me, Luke and Finn are having wonderful time on our bikes.  I stopped at the picnic tables, where my dad was sitting.  He said to me “Lachlan, why don’t you go on the grass?”.  “OK” I said.  I took off.  As I got closer to the grass, I started to slow down.  I went onto a bumpy surface just before the grass. “What was that?” I thought.

 Suddenly, my bike went sideways.  I tried to regain balance, but I failed.  CRASH! I hit the grass.  When I turned around to get up, my bike turned with me.  Instantly, I felt 2 pains: My left hand and my right knee.  Once I pushed my bike off me, I looked at my left hand.  There was a 1.5 centimetre cut.  Then I sat up and looked at my right knee. It had a dot with three lines coming from it.  The centre line was deepest, but still, all three lines had blood coming out.  I felt like I had birds flying around my head.

 Then Dad rushed over, with Luke and Finn behind him.  “Lachlan, are you OK?” asked Dad.  I shook my head.  He helped me get up.  When I tried to walk, my right knee collapsed.  Dad carried me to the car and when we got home mum put a plaster on my knee.  I still have the scar on my left hand.

When: 2011Who: Me, Luke, Finn and DadWhat: Bike crashWhere: Parkvale SchoolWhy: Because my bike went on something bumpy.

Friday, March 6, 2015

Week 5: Mystery Man Part 1

Mystery Man
An Origin Story
Part 1: Revenge in School
“Grrr”.  Hugh Jackman was standing in the hallway of his school Taremane school. Looking at the comic Book  in his hand he felt even angrier.  The comic book in his hand was called ‘ Dash Man And Hugh the Gorilla Breath by Oscar Taylor-Gee’.  Never, in his whole life had he been so angry.  He was 20 years old ( his school took 13-21 year olds ).  As he stood there sweating and frowning uncontrollably, something in his fragile brain cracked in half.  Crack!  Suddenly his deep deep frown transformed into a super wicked smile.  “ I’ll get Oscar” he muttered under his breath.  “He thinks he’s such a big shot.  Well he won’t be tomorrow, the annoying little brat”.  He strode out of the school still with a smile.  When he got home he went to his underground lab…  The next day at school in room 10 ( Hugh’s class ) everybody was there except Hugh.  “I wonder where Hugh is “ said Miss Dayken.  “ Huge Ackman’s probably snoring so loud that his house is in shambles”.  Everyone giggled.  They had no idea that Hugh was walking down the hallway that very moment and that he had heard every word.  “ Well “ said Miss Dayken.  “ We shall start today with “... BANG! The door smashed open and in stepped strange looking character.  The whole class gasped and retreated to the back wall.  The Character stepped towards the class.  With each step room 10 became more frightened.  5 meters, 4, 3, 2, 1, 30 centimetres… no further. Then he spoke “ Oscar where are you? “.  “ Hugh? “ said everyone.  “ Yes it’s me.  Oscar! “.  Finally Oscar came out from behind Caleb.  Hugh pointed his freezy beam 800 at Oscar.   Oscar stood on the spot, shaking.  Inside the suit Hugh pulled the trigger for the freezy beam 800.  Zap!  When the icy steam lifted, Oscar was frozen in a bulge of ice.  Tom went to push it over but zap!  Tom was frozen too.  “ My name is Mystery Man.  Anybody who dares to stop me will be frozen to they've turned blue “.  Mystery Man laughed evilly.  “Bye” he said.  “Well, I'm glad that that’s over” said Miss Dayken.  He never put his foot in that school again.


Part 2: Armitage. Coming Soon.