I Am Poem

This is my I Am Poem. When we started, the only things on there were the the I am/I wonder/I hear e.g. We had to fill them in with good vocab words and the best nouns and adjectives. The goal was to leave the reader thinking about our poem. My writing goal is vocab and I have definitely used lots. We also had to use describing words and 'in the moment' words. What I could've done better is maybe done some more describing. These are some of the vocab I've used:
Colourful-ish
Achieve
Computers
Rarely
Personal Best
Ultimate

I am awesome

I wonder if people try hard to achieve their goals

I hear Max speaking loudly

I see my colourful-ish computer screen

I want to make my parents proud

I am awesome

I pretend I am a rugby player

I feel Max’s elbow touching mine, as we type on our computers

I touch the keys on my computer

I worry about getting in trouble

I cry when I hurt myself (Rarely)

I am awesome

I understand that mistakes are okay

I say kind things about people

I dream of weird stuff

I try my personal best

I hope I get an ultimate pride award at the end of the year

I am awesome